Swampy

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Doktor, Jan 9, 2010.

  1. Doktor

    Doktor L1: Registered

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    mire

    This is my first map (I don´t really know how to name it) for TF2. It´s not finnished yet and I still have a lot of things to do.

    I lost some files for this map.. so it will take much longer to finnish now.. but I will work on it.
     
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  2. J4CK8

    J4CK8 L11: Posh Member

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    This is your first map?! Wow, it looks fantastic. Can't wait for a download and to play it. You've mapped for other source games I would assume?
     
  3. lana

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    I recommend brightening the play areas further. They're very dark.
     
  4. The Political Gamer

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  5. honorum646

    honorum646 L6: Sharp Member

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    It looks quite good for a first map, but it probably will be too dark. Perhaps adding a few spotlights or "ambient" light sources in the more frequently accessed areas would be good.
     
  6. Doktor

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    thanks for your advice I will put some more lights in there. And yes I made some half-life singleplayer maps before :D , but I did never something in that way before. (sorry for my bad english btw.)
     
  7. Remnic

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    Maybe you could name the map PL mire. Amazing work dure.
     
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  8. lana

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    I love the usage of z-space in the screenshots, and the amount of detail that's gone into it. With all the textures added in so far, it might be tough to adjust gameplay if issues come up. Also, you should add some particle systems to those buoys, I think there's one included. It'd allow you to brighten up the play area a little without many extra lights.
     
  9. absurdistof

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    Not bad, probably the best swamp-themed map I've seen to date.