PLR Sidetracked

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Erilis, Apr 22, 2012.

  1. Erilis

    Erilis L2: Carpets, Travel Goods & Bedding

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    Story
    By a wild coincidence both teams have broken down on either side of the same train station in the middle of nowhere. Carrying super secret supply shipments of deadly cargo, they intend on eliminating each other and must move their payloads through the train station and drop it on top of the other team’s truck.

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    Players will help their teammates carry their payload across the map, through the train station, and to the enemy convoy. They win simply by being the first to carry their bomb to the other side of the map.
     
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2012
  2. Seba

    aa Seba DR. BIG FUCKER, PHD

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    This looks extremely open outside and extremely cramped (and dark) inside. It also seems very short, are you planning on adding more to the kart path? Oh, and you might want to mark the boundaries of the map in some way.
     
  3. Tarry H Sruman

    Tarry H Sruman Large Orphanage Proprietor

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    I agree with pretty much everything Seba said.
     
  4. Erilis

    Erilis L2: Carpets, Travel Goods & Bedding

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    Thanks for the comments! I will upload some new screens to show the fencing around the sides. The space outside has more structures now but I hope the inside doesn't feel too cramped. I'd like for you to give it a test drive and let me know what you think. If I could get it play tested this week that would be awesome!
     
    Last edited: Apr 23, 2012
  5. Tarry H Sruman

    Tarry H Sruman Large Orphanage Proprietor

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    Make sure you fix the lighting, all playable areas need to be fully lit.