SFM Poster - Lunch Break [Deleted]

Discussion in '72hr Jam Entries' started by Originope, Jul 23, 2016.

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  1. Originope

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    SFM Poster - Lunch Break - SFM poster for the Summer 2016 72hr TF2Jam

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    Scout, Sniper and Engineer enjoy their daily lunch during a hard day's work at CP_Vanguard.
    Made for the TF2Maps Summer 2016 72hr TF2Jam.




    Note: if you are going to put my name on a highlights list or something after the jam, please credit me as "Originope" instead of "zombiezomber".
     
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  2. Mr.JC

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    This looks really nice. The lighting had a very calm relaxed feel and highlighted just the right places around the models. There's only one thing which isn't even that noticeable that could change. The right shoulder on Engi looks too tense for the relaxed feel of the poster
    Honestly though this looks really really well done and I'd want to see more in the future!
     
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  3. LeSwordfish

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    Mr.JC has said some excellent things which I agree with. I'm gonna be even more picky though, and say the sandwich and it's plate look a bit strange - i think getting a seperate sandwich and plate and posing them seperately would really sell how it's just been dropped! I love the expressions though!
     
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  4. Originope

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    Thanks for your feedback guys! If there are more jams in the future that accept SFM posters as entries, you can definitely expect more!
     
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