72hr [SFM Poster] Heavy Hitter 2016-07-25

Poster based off of Heavy vs Pyro

  1. Teleportato

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    [SFM Poster] Heavy Hitter - Poster based off of Heavy vs Pyro

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    I had a lot of fun making this for the 72hr Jam, trying to decide things like Pyro cosmetics that would fit the boxing theme and trying to make the punch look very noticeable.

    I am still learning how to use SFM and would greatly appreciate any kind of feedback.

    Community Items Used
    TF Wrestling Ring - Jojje
    Enhanced Pyro - Maxxy
     
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  2. LeSwordfish

    aa LeSwordfish semi-trained quasi-professional

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    This is a great picture - you've done good work on making it seem as if the pyro is really reeling from the punch - it feels like a high-framerate shot from a boxing match. The heavy seems very close to the pyro though - so close it looks like the punch would have to come pretty much entirely from the side. Moving the heavy a step or so back and extending his arm further could sell the swing more.
     
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  3. Muddy

    Server Staff Muddy Muddy

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    The Pyro's eyes are both hilarious and kind of creepy.
     
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  4. Teleportato

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    I definitely wished I had done a better job posing, but I'm glad you like it and took the time to criticize it.

    The eyes are probably one of my favorite features to be honest.