CP Scrooge's Manor

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Sgt_Dippy, Dec 23, 2010.

  1. Sgt_Dippy

    Sgt_Dippy L1: Registered

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    Hello tf2 mapping community. I have been a member of this site for quite a bit of time and now feel like I should contribute. I have started, and am on my way to finishing a Christmas themed map, Scrooge's Manor. This map is slightly based on Charles Dickens story, A Christmas Carol, the map story goes somewhat like this:

    Ebenezer Scrooge hates Christmas, in fact he forecloses on many of the people who live in the valley below him all the time during this season. He has recently moved from his previous home in London; the people have not the slightest clue about what he does or who keeps delivering him all the crates and packages he receives on a daily basis. Now truth be told, Scrooge is a business man of great proportions; a "spark of genius" has led him to almost insane feats. He has devised a plan to rid the world of "surplus population" through advances in RED rocketry. Blu does not like this, and so forth decides to stop him.

    Pretty much Scrooge partners with RED, they try to take over the world, Blu tries to stop them.

    Please help with playtesting, suggestions, and architectural improvements. The first part of the map is operational, oh and can someone direct me to a tutorial for taking correct screenshots.

    Thankyou in advance.
     
  2. Attsy

    Attsy L3: Member

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  3. red_flame586

    red_flame586 L7: Fancy Member

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    I can see a few pink and black checker-boards of death with reflections, make sure you fix them

    Also, improve screenshots like this, as well as take an overhead shot so we can actually see the layout. Apart from that, I can't tell much more from your screenshots, though it looks like a pretty good idea.
     
  4. Attsy

    Attsy L3: Member

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    After playing it awhile I think its way to small. As it is a demo man or solly can get to point C in under 5 seconds. Also the points need more than just one passage to them, else you have a huge spam fest among those routes.
     
    Last edited: Dec 25, 2010