ARENA Sandpost

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Nystical, Nov 18, 2014.

  1. Nystical

    Nystical L1: Registered

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  2. Muddy

    Server Staff Muddy Muddy

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    Cor blimey that's bright. Spare us our eyesight and turn down the bloom.

    Some more screenshots would be nice, too.
     
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  3. Pocket

    aa Pocket func_croc

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    Also, the name Warehouse has only been used some 700 times by custom TF2 maps. Might want to look into a more original one.
     
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  4. Dr. Sasha

    Dr. Sasha L4: Comfortable Member

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    That HDR is far too bright. Other than that, add some geometry and we might see it in a gameday.
     
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  5. Nystical

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    Thanks for the comments. I've lowered the brightness tremendously, changed the name of the map from warehouse to sandpost, added a couple more screenshots with the new brightness changes, and I am now working on further content.


    Is it possible to edit the thread title for the map?
     
  6. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    Done.
     
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  7. HQDefault

    aa HQDefault ...what

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    Given the circumstances, this is really good, looking at the screenshots!
    A little tight, but this is really excellent for your first map.
     
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  8. cat

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    It is a bit to dark. Try making less lights, and lights with more brightness. Also add props from where the lights come from so that the map makes sense. Maybe use light spots and dynamic lights. Other then that I really like the layout of the map. And also one more thing, you need more player spawns.