PL pl_shenmue

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by VODKA45, Apr 19, 2012.

  1. VODKA45

    VODKA45 L1: Registered

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    pl_shenmue_b7

    I love TF2!

    Enjoy!

    Forgive me for my bad english!
     
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  2. LeSwordfish

    aa LeSwordfish semi-trained quasi-professional

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    Some of the detailing is very nice, but overall the map is a bit dark and has too many similar coulors. Also, the detailing is all over the place. Logs indicating a sawmill or lumberyard are stacked near a building with massive factory pipes, concrete pipes, a mine tower, a sign indicating it works with gravel, a sign saying it's a blast complex, a pumpkin on a wooden cart, and a tractor tyre. And, uh, a Japanese temple.

    Also, make the water texture bigger. Water looks better at 1x1 than 0.25x0.25

    The screenshots don't give much of an impression of the gameplay. Can we see an overhead screenshot?
     
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  3. Wilson

    aa Wilson Burial by Sleep

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    Why does mining theme suddenly change into Japanese town?
     
  4. VODKA45

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    я выложил бета версии тепер можете посмотреть на сколько карта хорошая!
    I can not blogged a good tale but I tried very hard to...
     
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  5. bob+M|M+

    bob+M|M+ L6: Sharp Member

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    Nice job on all the Japanese architecture modeling, though I have to agree there are too many clashing elements that doesn't fit with the theme. Love the moss-engulfed tunnels. Really nice detailing.
     
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  6. VODKA45

    VODKA45 L1: Registered

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    Thanks for the awesome Pros and Cons! Very helpful for the future and supportive in general.
     
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  7. VODKA45

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    All the comments make it difficult to leave?
     
  8. Sergis

    aa Sergis L666: ])oo]v[

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    submit it i guess if you want it in the contest
     
  9. VODKA45

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    How? I thought that here!
     
  10. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    If you want to enter the map into the contest, post it here (and follow the posting guidelines)
     
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  11. VODKA45

    VODKA45 L1: Registered

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    Thank you! And then I would not know.
     
  12. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    Just so you know, the screenshot you provided does not follow the rules (the screenshot in the upload thread).

    You need to remove the text, and post just a plain picture of the map, nothing else on the image. just map.
     
  13. VODKA45

    VODKA45 L1: Registered

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    TY! You're a good man! Can I add you as a friend?