my first proper map

hey! im new to mapping and after following countless of tutorials, i finally made my first proper map!
it's not good, i know. But i'd love it if you could play it and let me know what you think! im open to critisism.

 

It would be great to also post a bsp before asking people to play it, not just taking a look at what's inside

 

here you go!(if it doesn't work my bad, im new)

 

oh wow, i did not know that was a thing! thank you!

 

Or you can join the TF2Maps.net Discord group, where you can add your map to the bot channel so it gets tested in the next IMP (Impromptu Map Test). Any feedback people leave during the playtest will appear under your map in the Feedback section of this site, alongside a demo of the playtest!