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Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by matou, Jul 15, 2011.

  1. matou

    matou L2: Junior Member

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    Stockpile is a map ive been working on for a little while and kind of left to sit for a bit but i have decided to come back to the map and try and finish it.

    the map is meant to be relatively small to help make CP rounds last less long as i tend to find they do.

    i'm currently looking for opinions/feedback on the layout of the map and how well it plays on a server with more then just myself :p
     
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  2. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    Looks flat, dull, open, and WAAAAY too much like granary.

    Your windows are too orange too in the second to last shot.

    EDIT: Also to avoid confusion, you might want to look into changing map names, Stockpile is already taken
     
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  3. tyler

    aa tyler snail prince, master of a ruined tower

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  4. Fr0Z3nR

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    You can kinda tell from the overhead, and your right. But Finals and Mid look too much like granary rehashes.
     
  5. grazr

    aa grazr Old Man Mutant Ninja Turtle

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    Yea, you've obviously taken a lot of inspiration from granary, perhaps too much.

    This image i really like:
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    But you definately need to do something different with your middle. If your middle is less obviously like granary the map in general will feel a lot more original. IE don't rely on teh containers for height differences.
     
  6. matou

    matou L2: Junior Member

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    Yeah, i took inspiration from it and as grazr said perhaps too much. I was taking a look myself with what you people have said and am looking at pretty much overhauling the middle point to be drastically different as for the final point I always seem to hit a wall on how to make a good final point so ill have to give it some thought.

    *edit* oops thought i had a mid shot in there ill go and fix that
     
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  7. zpqrei

    aa zpqrei Theme Changer Extraordinaire

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  8. Hanz

    aa Hanz Ravin' Rabbid

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    I already have a map called Stockpile so it would be cool if you changed yours. :)
     
  9. matou

    matou L2: Junior Member

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    No problem at all, i changed it to mny name for now
     
  10. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    Edited title to new name.