Feedback wanted for a Ju-Jitsu glossary

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  1. Werewolf

    Werewolf Probably not a real Werewolf

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    I have been writing a glossary of Ju-Jitsu related words for my local club and federation, and now I'd like some outside input / feedback.

    Basically, I'd like people to comment on how readable and understandable they find the glossary, particually from people who don't have a prior knowledge of Ju-Jitsu or martial arts in general.

    I have written up my draft version in a Google Doc so that people can view it and leave comments on it to suggest edits. Or just comment below.

    LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W5KX7n_9d5HZLoRVeX_ZaeKOBfGJMQg8NrI-S8AhemU/edit?usp=drivesdk