ok, this is what you need: adequate health packs and ammo, I ran around the map and saw none. believable buildings: right now all you have are buildings with some texture slapped on it. understand that in valve maps there are many buildings that outside look huge, but then you realize that there aren't that many parts of the building that is accessible. This makes the map seem more realistic. You should do this too. Your boxes and props look like some were just dumped around. In the end, it's hard to say what theme this is, just some buildings and props by the sea. I'd say you were between alpha and beta. RC1 is like the best the map can be, the map looking completely realistic. Know these are just tips, not trying to be critical.