- Sep 13, 2020
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- Thread starter CreepCropZ
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- Sep 13, 2020
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- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Fixed red spawn
-Added more routes for first point
-Made another entrance for red spawn
-Changed the doors of blu's spawn to transparent doors
-More minor fixes
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-Fixed red spawn
-Added more routes for first point
-Made another entrance for red spawn
-Changed the doors of blu's spawn to transparent doors
-More minor fixes
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Bull
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- Aug 30, 2011
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Hey man, I just had a walk around your map, some feedback:
First of all, well done on the lighting! Most starters forget to do proper lighting and just go around with fullbright maps, but your lights are very well done and the map seems illuminated greatly in all spaces.
I like the layout so far, map feels quite clean and easy to navigate. You've already got a little bit of vertical areas (like the balcony above A). You could see if you can make the map a bit more diverse with high and low areas.
Overal I feel you've got a very strong starting point here! You've blocked out a strong layout already and I think you should start experimenting with cover and diverse areas and flank routes next. Some other things I'd suggest:
Add another room in here for the actual BLU spawn so RED can't shoot into BLU's spawn and spawnkill everyone.
Add some cover (small buildings, fences, rocks) in between here and the RED base to block off sightlines a bit.
I'd try lowering the balcony walls here to allow sentries to shoot down the ledge; they're currently too high to shoot over while not standing on the wall itself.
This door reversing directions surprised me - it's a fun gimmick but as BLU I still expected it to be one-way. Maybe add some kind of sign showing that the direction has changed? Alternatively, you could add another door somewhere to the left that unlocks when the point is capped, and lock this one.
Hope this helps! Good start for sure, keep it up!
PS: might want to add some screenshots to your download here.
First of all, well done on the lighting! Most starters forget to do proper lighting and just go around with fullbright maps, but your lights are very well done and the map seems illuminated greatly in all spaces.
I like the layout so far, map feels quite clean and easy to navigate. You've already got a little bit of vertical areas (like the balcony above A). You could see if you can make the map a bit more diverse with high and low areas.
Overal I feel you've got a very strong starting point here! You've blocked out a strong layout already and I think you should start experimenting with cover and diverse areas and flank routes next. Some other things I'd suggest:
Add another room in here for the actual BLU spawn so RED can't shoot into BLU's spawn and spawnkill everyone.
Add some cover (small buildings, fences, rocks) in between here and the RED base to block off sightlines a bit.
I'd try lowering the balcony walls here to allow sentries to shoot down the ledge; they're currently too high to shoot over while not standing on the wall itself.
This door reversing directions surprised me - it's a fun gimmick but as BLU I still expected it to be one-way. Maybe add some kind of sign showing that the direction has changed? Alternatively, you could add another door somewhere to the left that unlocks when the point is capped, and lock this one.
Hope this helps! Good start for sure, keep it up!
PS: might want to add some screenshots to your download here.
- Sep 13, 2020
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to change things a little, and yes I will eventually post screenshots (i keep forgetting everytime i play test)
- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Added some props to block sightlines near point A
-Made an extra room in blu team's spawn to prevent spawnkilling
-Made the one way door FLIP (blu can now access it and red can't) from B to A more noticable
-More minor stuff
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and also i finally have screenshots
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- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Reduced sightlines near A gate SIGNIFICANTLY
-Added more vertical places near A
-Added some props near the main entrance for B to prevent sightlines
-More minor changes
hopefully snipers dont dominate this place anymore
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- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Added some props
-Added patches under healthkits and ammopacks
-And more minor stuff
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-Added some props
-Added patches under healthkits and ammopacks
-And more minor stuff
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- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Added new area near main entrance for last
-Added more cover for sightlines
-More props and other stuff
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-Added new area near main entrance for last
-Added more cover for sightlines
-More props and other stuff
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- Sep 13, 2020
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Update :
-Reworked last (Added new upper flank route for BLU, changed the platform for the point, and blocked some sightlines)
-Added more areas
-More minor stuff
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-Reworked last (Added new upper flank route for BLU, changed the platform for the point, and blocked some sightlines)
-Added more areas
-More minor stuff
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