PL Buzzard Nest b3

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  1. RogerMasters

    RogerMasters L2: Junior Member

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    PL_Buzzard Nest "badwater style" is my second payload map.
    The theme desert same to pl_Upward, The way and in lathe to a cliff ties where the teams red has a port.
    Any and all constructive criticism is welcome.:love:
     
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  2. Faux Rhinoceros

    aa Faux Rhinoceros Also known as Dr. Element

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    Really nice =D

    Some better quality pictures would be sexeh :3

    The map looks like it would be really funny to play on. Cant really point fingers at anything yet :p
     
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  3. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    Pic #4 has a huge sightline... and those models (the 3 towers and the blu sign) look pretty low quality... much like some of your other screen's: use this guide to take better ones
     
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  4. Prestige

    aa Prestige im not gay anymore

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    sightlines looks fine imo. map reminds me of badwater which is good.
     
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  5. REEJ

    REEJ L7: Fancy Member

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    I'd make a roof over that long bridge (exactly 2forts style)
     
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  6. Crash

    aa Crash func_nerd

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    I think people go a bit too overboard calling out sightlines from screenshots. Pretty much every popular map has at least a few long sightlines. I don't see the problem in tossing some in here and there as long as you provide cover, which in that screenshot there is the lower path so it should be fine.
     
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  7. Leminnes

    aa Leminnes

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    That sightline doesn't look any longer than Stage 1 of Goldrush's. But that might not be a good reason.
     
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  8. Fr0Z3nR

    aa Fr0Z3nR Creator of blackholes & memes. Destroyer of forums

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    No, your right, some sightlines are good, it allows for snipers to do their role. But the one I pointed it, I feel that it would give the sniper too much power, you have a little alcove to hide in and can basically see all the area in front of you.
     
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  9. Faux Rhinoceros

    aa Faux Rhinoceros Also known as Dr. Element

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    The sniper is already a weak class imo (Unless the sniper is called Supersandvich -_-)
     
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  10. Wilson

    aa Wilson Burial by Sleep

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    What do you mean sniper is already a weak class?
    Jarate and Bushwacka combo alone makes sniper pretty damn powerful, nothing more scary than seeing sniper running towards you with bushwacka when jarated.
     
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  11. Faux Rhinoceros

    aa Faux Rhinoceros Also known as Dr. Element

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    I meant tactically... A team with 3 snipers are fucked, if you know what i mean :p
     
  12. RogerMasters

    RogerMasters L2: Junior Member

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    Relation to the sniper, they always exist a way to prevent, and also spy can surprise the sniper
    I will go to change some places, another thing that a friend said, is for taking off the screens for pyro to knock down players in the sea

    I now go to work in 3dsky of the map, I will go to use models of the TF2Maps " Lighthouse by Psy"
     
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  13. RogerMasters

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  14. Faux Rhinoceros

    aa Faux Rhinoceros Also known as Dr. Element

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    Im blinded by awesomeness :wow:
     
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  15. RogerMasters

    RogerMasters L2: Junior Member

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  16. Languid

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    I really think you need new environment lighting. The stuff that you have at the moment does no favours to your map and just looks bland, to be honest
     
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  17. Micnax

    aa Micnax I maek map

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    Why does the water look a lot less blue than the previous screenshots? :(
     
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  18. RogerMasters

    RogerMasters L2: Junior Member

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  19. Moose

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    unless the sniper is called blob

    Anyways, your water looks pretty weird, I think you need to scale the texture up by a lot. Otherwise it looks nice, although overall it seems a bit flat.
     
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  20. RogerMasters

    RogerMasters L2: Junior Member

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    3 new pics:
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