KotH Brimstone

Discussion in 'Map Factory' started by Boogaloo, Apr 21, 2012.

  1. Boogaloo

    Boogaloo L1: Registered

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    This is my first map, a pretty straightforward king of the hill map. Obviously it's a work in progress; suggestions are appreciated.
     
  2. Tarry H Sruman

    Tarry H Sruman Large Orphanage Proprietor

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    Fix the ramp in the fourth screenshot so it actually touches the ground.
     
  3. colacan

    colacan L5: Dapper Member

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    I would redesign the ramp and the towers. They just don't fit in really. (looks more like some Disneyland castle)
    Also, try to use more different textures for walls and floor. The wooden room in screen 3 is all the same.
    If the outside of a building is bricks, why would the inside be wood?
    Other than the textures and towers it could be a good map. Keep working on it. (It might be tempting to start a new one, but don't. I made that mistake too often and I find too much unfinished maps on my HD. Most of them where crap anyway =p)
     
  4. Faux Rhinoceros

    aa Faux Rhinoceros Also known as Dr. Element

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    Don't think too much of the towers right now, its an alpha after all :D

    Its good for a first map. Try to put it up for a gameday some time :D
     
  5. Fredrik

    Fredrik L6: Sharp Member

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    It looks like there are no healthkits or ammopacks. Add them!