72hr Badlands x Reckoner 1

A tale of forbidden love between two competitive-league maps.

  1. Idolon

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    Badlands x Reckoner - A tale of forbidden love between two competitive-league maps.

    An erotic encounter between two maps searching for love in the rough and tumble world of competitive Team Fortress 2. Written in 72 hours for the Summer 2016 72hr TF2Jam.

    External download is a link to the story on fanfiction.net. Technically 18+/NSFW, but nothing is particularly explicit.
     
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  2. Another Bad Pun

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    You actually did it
    Is this for real
    Edit: read chapter 1, pretty good character development so far. more than likely you spent a whole day on this chapter
    Edit 2: chapter 2
    I guess reckoner's perspective makes sense here. Transition between characters perspectives could be better. Story def starting to get weird
    Chapter 3- they're at a bus stop?
    Skipped most of it tbh
    Chapter 4 - rip sunshine

    Conclusion: this story is too short, romance feels rushed, but it's not like you needed a 72h badge anyway so good work
     
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  3. dryerlint

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    You... you absolute madman.
     
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  4. Crowbar

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    still waiting for phi to reply
    edit: BigBoneLuvr69
     
  5. phi

    aa phi For Whom The Sorrows Sing

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    I am honoured. In a weird "this is simultaneously the funniest and most absurd thing I have ever read and I can't believe my maps are main characters" way.

    (I knew Ido had wrote it forever now but only now has he made it public. What an intense read.)
     
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  6. Yrr

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    I'm v happy I managed to narrow down the author to being one of two people, one of which was ido

    not as good as deducing the exact author but still pretty good deduction

    anyways this is incredible
     
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  7. Hotel Detective

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    I could have sworn I was the detective here.
    Why are you stealing my work?

    e: nevermind I couldn't figure it out either
     
  8. Crowbar

    aa Crowbar perfektoberfest

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    Idk why you Yrr also suspected chin though.
     
  9. Yrr

    aa Yrr An Actual Deer

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    it was more that there was no evidence to rule him out
     
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  10. Moonrat

    aa Moonrat The end of an era

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    HA! Lucky for me... I think..... My friend spent today reading shitty sonic fanfics so I'm ready for this!

    That didn't take long...... aaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECCCCCH
     
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  11. sevin

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    jesus christ why do people do this
     
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  12. iiboharz

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    Haha was I a potential suspect?
     
  13. Davekillerish

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    Im putting this through a TTS instead of reading it. (books amiright?)

    Edit: Put the prologue in it, and im scared.
     
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  14. Zed

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    Oh, so you're the one who wrote this. I saw it on tf.tv a while ago and I was thoroughly amused.
     
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    We will be having a dramatic reading of part of this as part of the next exhibition game.
     
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    I hate 5cp's... But now. I want this.
    Appealing to horny words is enough to get me interested, apparently.
     
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    Sunshine Sunshine, Where art though Sunshine?
     
  18. Nuke

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    Oh Snakewater x Sunshine.... S-S-S... did anyone even got the joke? #offtopic
     
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    you were on the list but i figured you wouldnt be able to take it seriously enough

    woulda been memier
     
  20. iiboharz

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    true tbh it would've been filled with shit-tier memes
     
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