Another Day Of Scorching Hot Sun

Another Day Of Scorching Hot Sun 2017-02-12

Taffer Garrideb

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Feb 10, 2017
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Another Day Of Scorching Hot Sun - In The BadLaLalands

My second TF2Jam entry. : D
[Link to image on my Steam profile.]


Credits:
Hearse by DeRosaJ [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=272367176&searchtext=vehicles]
Army Truck by Jukebox [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=267712656&searchtext=vehicles]
Cement Truck by ✥ℜ☯ℑℵ✥ [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=263045376&searchtext=vehicles]
Battle Tank by Metaru [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=265555743&searchtext=vehicles]
Enhanced Truck by Kalimando [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=165897356&searchtext=vehicles]
1941 Packard Super 8 Sedan by Astute [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=423614887&searchtext=vehicles]
Camper by Sam [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=234993252&searchtext=sniper]
Enhanced Engineer by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=186949444]
Enhanced Soldier by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=293617102]
Enhanced Heavy by SedimentarySocks [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=218194088]
Casual Medic by Doctor Birdbrain [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=291043093]
Enhanced Scout by Maxxy [http://source.maxofs2d.net/index.php?dir=models/tf_scout_enhanced/]
Miss Pauling HWM by Crazyb2000 [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=297189835]
Scout's Mom HWM by Rebbacus [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=297930756]
Deathmatch Mercenary by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=416722824]
The Civilian by Maxxy [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=584650263]
 

zahndah

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Wow, there is a lot going on in this. Its cool how lively the scene is because of all of it, but i think there is a bit too much in it. I think you could maybe portray the lively feeling with much less actual content in the image, and then the viewer would be able to comprehend it easier.
 

Taffer Garrideb

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Feb 10, 2017
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Thanks for the critique, dude! :]
Yeah, I was going for a big scale and liveliness to parody the scene it's based on, but I can see what you mean. I think maybe if I had changed the lighting a bit and made the image less flat looking the content may not seem as overwhelming? But yes, taking out some of the content and giving it a more open space would probably be an improvement. Thanks again!