72hr Another Day Of Scorching Hot Sun 2017-02-12

In The BadLaLalands

  1. Taffer Garrideb

    Taffer Garrideb L1: Registered

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    Another Day Of Scorching Hot Sun - In The BadLaLalands

    My second TF2Jam entry. : D
    [Link to image on my Steam profile.]


    Credits:
    Hearse by DeRosaJ [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=272367176&searchtext=vehicles]
    Army Truck by Jukebox [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=267712656&searchtext=vehicles]
    Cement Truck by ✥ℜ☯ℑℵ✥ [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=263045376&searchtext=vehicles]
    Battle Tank by Metaru [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=265555743&searchtext=vehicles]
    Enhanced Truck by Kalimando [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=165897356&searchtext=vehicles]
    1941 Packard Super 8 Sedan by Astute [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=423614887&searchtext=vehicles]
    Camper by Sam [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=234993252&searchtext=sniper]
    Enhanced Engineer by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=186949444]
    Enhanced Soldier by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=293617102]
    Enhanced Heavy by SedimentarySocks [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=218194088]
    Casual Medic by Doctor Birdbrain [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=291043093]
    Enhanced Scout by Maxxy [http://source.maxofs2d.net/index.php?dir=models/tf_scout_enhanced/]
    Miss Pauling HWM by Crazyb2000 [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=297189835]
    Scout's Mom HWM by Rebbacus [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=297930756]
    Deathmatch Mercenary by Maxxy [https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=416722824]
    The Civilian by Maxxy [http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=584650263]
     
  2. zahndah

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    Wow, there is a lot going on in this. Its cool how lively the scene is because of all of it, but i think there is a bit too much in it. I think you could maybe portray the lively feeling with much less actual content in the image, and then the viewer would be able to comprehend it easier.
     
  3. Taffer Garrideb

    Taffer Garrideb L1: Registered

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    Thanks for the critique, dude! :]
    Yeah, I was going for a big scale and liveliness to parody the scene it's based on, but I can see what you mean. I think maybe if I had changed the lighting a bit and made the image less flat looking the content may not seem as overwhelming? But yes, taking out some of the content and giving it a more open space would probably be an improvement. Thanks again!