A running list of why your map is terrible:

[Sgt Frag]

Don't feel bad Tovi. I like a thicker pin up girl.

I stretch them vertically so they are super skinny.

 

[Pocket]

EDIT: Sorry, I saw the D in DJive and thought it was drp. My B.

You hrped so hard you drped?

 

[Moose]

Why are all of these rooms way over here where they aren't ever being used? I do not need an extra 10 seconds added to walktimes just to get to the same place I was before.

Your entire map is flat.

You didn't build cubemaps.