A Pyroshark's Story 2017-08-06

72h Summer Jam Submission

  1. That guy you don't know

    That guy you don't know L1: Registered

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    A Pyroshark's Story - 72h Summer Jam Submission

    Here is my submission to the 2017 72h Summer Jam.
     
  2. Freyja

    aa Freyja ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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    Cute story!

    My feedback would be every time a character says something, drop it onto it's own line. This is how most novels do it and it makes it a lot easier to read and keep track of!