Model Female Scout

Naso · Jun 12, 2009

Looks pretty good but like most of the other posts, could use some improvement!

Try changing the lips, they seem really flat right now.

Maybe give her slightly bigger hips to give her that feminine curve, not to much thow.

Also, you could change the hair style, make it a small pony tail in the back?

But yeah it looks good so far, nice nob, cant wait to see the final thing, and hear the voice acting !

StoneFrog · Jun 12, 2009

What Is Schwa said:
What. The. F.

A normal, plain looking female with a short skirt? RAPE VICTIM!

You know, I meant the really traumatized-looking expression on her face. Not the short skirt.

Nineaxis · Jun 12, 2009

Yeah, this is by far the best female model yet, my only beef is with the huge round eyes, like StoneFrog said, she looks traumatised, not like a mercenary.

AyesDyef · Jun 12, 2009

Alright.

I forgot to texture the lips when I took the screenshot.
Her shoulders are a little too high because I haven't properly rigged them yet.
I've only rigged her legs and face so far.
She has a ponytail, you just can't see it.

As for back story, I'm currently going a long the lines of-

Scouts little sister, had never known who her brothers were as mum & dad broke up over who baseball team was better.
Since then, she's been raised for the enemy team.

I've got a few other ideas floating around.
Someone who no one probably knows is voicing her.

She'll be sounding perky and semi innocent with a mean side.
eg. "Oopsie, I think I just OWNED you!" kinda thing.

As for her wide eyes and plain expression.
She is NOT faceposed in any way.

So her eyes are opened to the maximum, that's why she looks a little freaked out.

SuperNerd · Jun 13, 2009

Also, could you make the hair a little bit longer and maybe blonde?
And more tan?

The back story and character sounds good.
It'll probably be funny to listen to and play with.

MangyCarface · Jun 13, 2009

SuperNerd said:
Also, could you make the hair a little bit longer and maybe blonde?
And more tan?

Uh, no, not every girl has to be a valley girl : /

Looking forward to the final model! Don't forget the 'lashes too, girls naturally have more pronounced eyelashes than men

uma plata · Jun 13, 2009

I would make the hands smaller. She's got man hands!

Looking good

AyesDyef · Jun 15, 2009

I'm sorry, I can't do much about the man hands, they are slightly smaller than the original scout's hands, but I've gotta stay as close as I can to the original rig...

DJive · Jun 15, 2009

wa-ow!

Engineer · Jun 15, 2009

Nice job

SuperNerd · Jun 15, 2009

AyesDyef said:
[image]http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/514/fingersdone.jpg[/image]

Woah.
That's really good.

Through from the angle the shoulders are a bit to high/hunched.
And the bag is a glitched.

More pictures from more angles?

Phrog Kiniget · Jun 15, 2009

SuperNerd said:
Also, could you make the hair a little bit longer and maybe blonde?
And more tan?

The back story and character sounds good.
It'll probably be funny to listen to and play with.

Blonde and tan = BAD with the back story.

She's a southie according to the back story of her + the Scout's original. If she should have any texture work done it should be freckles which people have already suggested, and I would suggest red hair because South Boston is pretty Irish immigrant heavy. All though I could see that causing problems with the whole Red vs Blue thing so her current hair color is cool.

I also agree that she needs a necklace of some sort to match the scout's dogtags.

This is a great job dude. I can't wait to see it all done and finished.

AyesDyef · Jun 15, 2009

Phrog Kiniget said:
Blonde and tan = BAD with the back story.

She's a southie according to the back story of her + the Scout's original. If she should have any texture work done it should be freckles which people have already suggested, and I would suggest red hair because South Boston is pretty Irish immigrant heavy. All though I could see that causing problems with the whole Red vs Blue thing so her current hair color is cool.

I also agree that she needs a necklace of some sort to match the scout's dogtags.

This is a great job dude. I can't wait to see it all done and finished.

I'm considering freckles, but they don't give the Scout the look of being very fast look as clean skin does.
As for the red hair, I'd leave that for a class such as the Engie

(Engie should have freckles).

As for the necklace, I did try to have some form of dogtag/jewelery around her neck, but it really didn't suit the already placed v-neck shirt, and clashes with the design.

Like seeing the dogtags on a male scout was the quick way of seeing the difference between his head and his body.

Whilst in this Female scout, the V-neck helps break up her head from her body.

... If that makes sense...

An Icy Mouse · Jun 15, 2009

AyesDyef said:
I'm sorry, I can't do much about the man hands, they are slightly smaller than the original scout's hands, but I've gotta stay as close as I can to the original rig...

whats with all the tiny defects in the model? those spikes etc.. hopefully those wont be in the final thing??

otherwise it's looking amazing:thumbup:

EDIT: also, her hands and face are different shades, they need to be unified slightly.

AyesDyef · Jun 15, 2009

An Icy Mouse said:
whats with all the tiny defects in the model? those spikes etc.. hopefully those wont be in the final thing??

otherwise it's looking amazing:thumbup:

EDIT: also, her hands and face are different shades, they need to be unified slightly.

I already know about the spikes

They're bits and pieces that I haven't rigged yet.
So they like to go off in the wrong places.

As for the different shades, yeah, I'll fix that up after I get the rigging done :laugh:

The Political Gamer · Jun 15, 2009

tHat Guy found this. Do you know anything about it by any chance?

MangyCarface · Jun 15, 2009

Ungh, that pyro is terrible.

However, the scout is already leagues better! When can we get a taste of the voice acting (which may make or break the model)

Void · Jun 15, 2009

Yowza.

StoneFrog · Jun 15, 2009

I love how this is progressing (not the Pyro). What's with all the random but incredibly skilled modellers popping up on the forums lately?

*cough*heavybear*cough*

Nineaxis · Jun 15, 2009

Oh god oh god oh god erase the image of that pyro as soon as possible arrrrgghhgghghgh

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