Cubicle

well nice try for a first map, but 10 fps is scary! lol

Hmm, lots of very big and open areas. I think you could shrink the areas down and lower the heights quite a lot. It'd play a lot faster.

The hologram in the middle of the map is too confusing, move it down on to the point.

Improvement. I still think the heights could come down a bit. Found some other things:

I can jump up and stand on the resupply signs above the spawn doors, so you might want to make them not-solid. Also the large medkit up near spawn allows for some serious spawn camping by soldiers and demomen (its also floating off the ledge). I'd scrap it. If people want full health they can run back to the spawn room.

There's nowhere to really build sentries around the middle point (that I could see). I think something like a shack with fairly open walls on top of the structure the middle point is in would add greatly to the middle battle area.

Other things outlined in attachments.