ghostfactory

coOKie

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Mar 22, 2009
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Hello There.

Ill like to introduce my new map, its my first serious map, and i already invested over 30 hours of mapping, so bluespawn and 30 % of playing area are done.

Its called Ghostfactory, because its dark, creepy and looking dead :D
I hope it transmits the atmosphere ive intended (sry my english sux i know :p)

Ive uploaded some screenshots for you to take a look AND give me nice feedback for gameplay, design and technical ideas!

Ill survive all critics so say what you think, it can only make this map better (i hope),


Now its up to you! Feedback pls :)

Map-Status:
*Blue Base 90%
*35% of total playable area
*Red Base 0%


screen1x.jpg


screen6c.jpg
 
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GrimGriz

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Jan 2, 2009
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Looks like fun. I look forward to playing it on a gameday or something :)
 

ikem

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Dec 8, 2008
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dont upload the vmf upload the bsp, doh!
 

Fraz

Blu Hatte, Greyscale Backdrop.
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Dec 28, 2008
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I dont think he has finished it yet
"so bluespawn and 30 % of playing area are done."
 

00000000000000000000000

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Jul 9, 2008
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I think you should make the light_spots in the Blue spawn have a wider outer spreading angle, and disable the shadows on the detail rocks. Apart from that it looks great. If you want to make it really spooky you could add more fog. Great start so far.
 

coOKie

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Mar 22, 2009
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i dont know what the hell is going on but the compile is taking ages suddenly and i get the messege: Map Extends are too long. And entities are outside the map, but i cant find anything...
 

RavenStryker

Former Alias: †Blade†/Xi.Cynx
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Nov 25, 2008
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alt+p can be your friend =)
Also judging from the first screenshot you posted HDR needs some work still.
Also Load the pointfile and it'll lead you right to the problem.
You just have to load it everytime you fix the current problem it sees.
 

coOKie

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Mar 22, 2009
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Ok its running again smoothly, contruction site pl_ghostfactory WIP :)

still searching for good ideas :]