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squ1rrel

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Rough around the edges but wanted to test out some British railway architecture for my map...
 

FGD5

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Added the Executive, a fancy urban car. Textures are still to be worked on for all models, details, phong, etc.

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FGD5

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Live streamed the modelling of this today, another one for the vehicle pack
Plans for it: 4 skins, plain grey with team coloured stripes, plain grey with no stripes and a yellow one. I want to animate it as well but I'm no good at that so animations will come later on.

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BigfootBeto

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Live streamed the modelling of this today, another one for the vehicle pack
Plans for it: 4 skins, plain grey with team coloured stripes, plain grey with no stripes and a yellow one. I want to animate it as well but I'm no good at that so animations will come later on.

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hm. I think that might be too cartoony for tf2. Reminds me of the yoshi helicopter.

It looks like you're using the Sikorsky H-34 as reference
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The 4 wheels you have might be what makes it look too goofy. Your model is also short and stubby, and maybe it's the perspective, but the rear rudder looks warped. The current helicopter model doesn't seem to fit in with the other vehicles when the proportions are overly exaggerated. TF2 environments have generally realistic proportions and the cartoony aspect is brought with simplistic textures and impressionistic backgrounds. Now that I mention it, the exhaust of the tractor trailers has wonky proportions.
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FGD5

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hm. I think that might be too cartoony for tf2. Reminds me of the yoshi helicopter.

It looks like you're using the Sikorsky H-34 as reference

The 4 wheels you have might be what makes it look too goofy. Your model is also short and stubby, and maybe it's the perspective, but the rear rudder looks warped. The current helicopter model doesn't seem to fit in with the other vehicles when the proportions are overly exaggerated. TF2 environments have generally realistic proportions and the cartoony aspect is brought with simplistic textures and impressionistic backgrounds. Now that I mention it, the exhaust of the tractor trailers has wonky proportions.

Its based of a Sikorsky, but the version:



I might mess around with the nose cause I made it really big on purpose, but I think the rest of the model is pretty similar to the inspiration. And with the exhaust, I made it really bit in purpose as well, but since I've got a fair bit of feedback on its size Ill be changing that one. Thanks for the criticism, ill have a work on it!