my first proper map

updelta

L1: Registered
Dec 2, 2018
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hey! im new to mapping and after following countless of tutorials, i finally made my first proper map!
it's not good, i know. But i'd love it if you could play it and let me know what you think! im open to critisism.
 

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L2: Junior Member
Aug 11, 2013
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It would be great to also post a bsp before asking people to play it, not just taking a look at what's inside
 

updelta

L1: Registered
Dec 2, 2018
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here you go!(if it doesn't work my bad, im new)
 

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FloofCollie

I really suck!
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Nov 5, 2016
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Or you can join the TF2Maps.net Discord group, where you can add your map to the bot channel so it gets tested in the next IMP (Impromptu Map Test). Any feedback people leave during the playtest will appear under your map in the Feedback section of this site, alongside a demo of the playtest!