Rooftop Rumble

CTF Rooftop Rumble Alpha 11

virtualconnor4

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Apr 12, 2018
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Rooftop Rumble - Red and Blu are fighting over a flooded resort.

This is my first map and I would really, REALLY appreciate feedback. I need your help to help me improve this map.
 

WhoWee!

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Jan 12, 2018
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Also a couple of things:
1. Dont put v03 instead of v03 put a3. watch this for help:
View: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7YqJ4MyG7w

2. Wouldn't recommend putting the intel cap zone right outside/on top of spawn. That leads to spawn camping/being way to hard to cap...
3. i cant cap...
4. add more signs..
Thats about it for now. Please dont take this too harshly. It looks like a good map. Keep up the good work...
 

virtualconnor4

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Apr 12, 2018
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Thank you for the feedback! I will take this into heavy consideration. You can expect me to add more signs in a future update. Also, I am posting updated screenshots right now. Thanks again!
 

Goodnight Girl

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Jul 22, 2016
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Looks real pretty, I would add walls by all the indoor stairwells so people coming up the stairs only have one or two places to focus on shooting instead of all 270 degrees around them. Also, I'm not a fan of having a pit right in front of spawn without some railing or warning sign, and it doesn't help that this area feels kinda unnatural with the brushwork. Otherwise it looks really legit, and I like the focus on the verticality a lot. Not bad for one of your first maps c:
 

Goodnight Girl

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Jul 22, 2016
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Ah, I meant the stairwell connecting to the intel room, it just seems easy to camp considering it's right on top of the spawn

And ay, I like these new vents, but I wish it just had some ladders instead of the weird box-climby thing. Also has the water room always been there? I dunno if players on the bottom need it anymore if they've got these vents that are faster, along with all the other ways they could cross the middle area, the vents in concept seem like a good addition though.
 

virtualconnor4

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Apr 12, 2018
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Thank you, I'll make sure to cover the stairway up with a wall to prevent camping. As for the vents, there aren't many ladders in tf2 and I wonder if adding ladders there is a good idea. P.S. yes the pool was always there. Thank you again for feedback!