WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

Diva Dan

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What do you all think of this building? I feel like it's missing something but don't know what.
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Lain

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What do you all think of this building? I feel like it's missing something but don't know what.
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I don't think it's missing anything at all, I think it's in fact a little bit over detailed. Not sure what I personally would remove though.
 

Gale

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What do you all think of this building? I feel like it's missing something but don't know what.
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Try putting a warm colored (and sublte) ambient light in the front. It doesn't need an actual light source. The sunlight color is a good start. For ambient lights like that, I'll usually use the middle of my light_environment's light color, and ambient color.

Nevermind! Didn't think about the contrast luring players over to it for no good reason! (looks great though!)
 
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zahndah

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What do you all think of this building? I feel like it's missing something but don't know what.

To me the brick overhanging roof looks really bad, it seems as if it would be way more effort than just an awning.
 

Yrr

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that looks pretty open with no cover, i'd suggest getting something in there to break it up
 

Yrr

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You can also use a program like ShareX to automatically upload screen captures to an image host.
 

SnickerPuffs

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Working a bit on my Asymmetric Boogaloo submission.

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I'll probably post some cleaner pictures later tonight.
 

SnickerPuffs

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those first two screenshots look huge and flat, try mixing the height up a little bit

Yes, I know, I didn't start mapping last night. I plan on adding some rather exciting height variations in the later half of the map and leaving the "BLU-to-A" area much blander in comparison, but I'll probably throw some more height variation in there to spice it up a bit.
 

nickybakes

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I know this is TF2Maps, but making CsGo maps is quite fun! Back in February, I posted this map on the workshop for me and my friends to play around on and have fun with, and in August someone I didn't know came to me telling me he had tons of feedback for the map. I finally got around to updating the map, and probably the most noticeable changes being how I slapped some WiP textures down and made the lighting look better. The lighting is based off of de_sparity's lighting, but will most likely change when I get into the detailing stage. You can subscribe to the map here: http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=603799765 . Feel free to load up a lobby with your friends, play around on it, and send me some feedback. Thanks!

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