wired a2

I like it! I thought the layout was fairly unintuitive, but I'm guessing that might have been your intention, and it fits with the Indiana Jones part of the theme.



This pillar is the worst. Whenever I wanted to grapple up from below, I would always run into it and have to maneuver around it.



Two small health packs here. Also, it would be really cool if the river was a trap, and it swept the player out into the open. Since everyone has grappling hooks, it wouldn't mean certain death, but I think it would make for a fun mechanic that would be a fun surprise for people who fail to make the jump above or try to get the health for the first time.



This corner is just kind of here.



It struck me as kind of odd that there's a powerup holder right here, since I picked one up on the way to get the enemy's intelligence. It's just a little weird that it would be right in the middle of a direct path to the intelligence, when most of the time you have to go a little bit out of your way to pick up a powerup.



I would widen this hole for convenience. It also would look better as a collapsed part of the floor instead of a manmade-looking hole, since Wired doesn't currently use the "ruin" aspect of the map in its design very much.



Is this meant to be a death trap? It's currently just kind of annoying. I like the idea of having the players navigate through a simple death trap to obtain powerups (similar to the one on Hellfire), though, especially since, again, the theme of Indiana Jones-style temples.

Overall, though, it's a great start, and I look forward to maybe playing it in an imp!