The Winter Jam - Show Off Your WIPs!

BlazingDiancie

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Also, Giants using swaggy skins:
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(The Demos are meant to have skins, but my custom model doesnt support the skins, I'll get this rectified.)
 

LeSwordfish

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Here is the sketch from the first page cleaned up a bit. Next up is lineart. If you think something is off with this, tell me now.
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If I might, something seems a little off with the Demoman's face - I get what you're trying to do, but he seems to have a lot of flabby flesh here being pushed up by his hand. He's a lean bloke - if he rests his head on his hand, it probably stays the same shape.
 

Da_Ch33ze

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Oct 4, 2014
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Hey there

For my contribution I'm going to be putting up a fanfiction (found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14p2480IDkW0CQXNblvrS4f3jqCRxASm2V9CAHL7xzLM/edit?usp=sharing), which I would really love feedback on.

A bit weird I know, but I've had this story in the concept phase for ages and my ultimate goal is to adapt it into a Source Filmmaker animation. That can only happen if the story is good enough.

If you do have feedback, could you please quote this post, just makes things a little easier :)
 

Da_Ch33ze

L1: Registered
Oct 4, 2014
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Hey there

For my contribution I'm going to be putting up a fanfiction (found here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/14p2480IDkW0CQXNblvrS4f3jqCRxASm2V9CAHL7xzLM/edit?usp=sharing), which I would really love feedback on.

A bit weird I know, but I've had this story in the concept phase for ages and my ultimate goal is to adapt it into a Source Filmmaker animation. That can only happen if the story is good enough.

If you do have feedback, could you please quote this post, just makes things a little easier :)

If Demoman couldn't get beer anymore, would it phase him?
 

Bogdy

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Aug 13, 2014
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"Hello and welcome to the first ever episode of Map Dissection."
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Bogdy

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I think this might give away what I will be talking about in the first episode.
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Bogdy

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Ixy

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Lineart is about done! If you can think of something that could need improvement, tell me now!

The two things that stand out to me are how Scout is holding his cards (his thumb should be on the "inside" of the cards) and Spy's right elbow - you could loosen the bend there, I think. (Hope this is in time!)
 

Bogdy

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"We must admit that not everyone enjoys playing Vanilla TF2."
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