Schlachtfield

CP Schlachtfield A2

[DE] Niemand

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Sep 22, 2015
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Schlachtfield - My first map :D

Willkommen auf Schlachtfield,

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this is my first map. I hope you still have fun on it.
About feedback I would be happy :D

(PS: Sorry for my bad English. I try to get better :p)

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Pawlakov

Deliberately incoherent
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Jun 1, 2013
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For the first time on this site i see someone German.
About the map: I'm worried about sightlines. Try some height variations and check if the whole map is not too big.
Herzliche Grüße aus Polen. Ich wünsche dir viel Glück! (sorry for my (maybe) bad German. Still learning)

EDIT: I downloaded your map. Your map now is a snipers' paradise. Last point's room is way too big. Second point is not bad, but consider some heighth variations. Middle point is also to flat. Please aviod long and straight routes.
 
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[DE] Niemand

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Sep 22, 2015
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Thanks for your feedback. I try to implement it in my next version. (Und dein Deutsch ist nicht mal so schlecht)
 

CriminalBunny

Lasers are just deadly rainbows
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Oct 11, 2013
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Judging by the screenshots, your map looks overscaled. Be careful as overscaling a map can create ridiculous sightlines. Here's a really useful guide on scaling. It also looks like it needs more height variation (As far as I know I'm saying thing Pawlakov already said) Look at some Valve or Showcase maps to see how height variation is implemented is that word too fancy for you? it is for me

Hope I helped :D