KotH _firstry_a1

You probably uploaded the thumbnails, not the actual images. Use "r_drawviewmodel 0" next time you take screenshots to get rid of the weapon.

Don't include the version number in the thread name. You can't change it on your own.

From testing these are the main issues thrown up;

The darkness of the spawn rooms. This comes from just using light_spot resulting in a well lit floor but a really dark ceiling, I recommend putting some light entities in the spawn to provide a bit more light.

The death pits, Although personally I think the map doesn't need death pits if you want to keep them then you really must put a light at their location as at the moment it is nearly impossible to see them before it's too late.

Looking good so far, really not bad for a first try. Keep it up

Certainly better than my first try
Pretty soon you'll be able to change your icon to have Mann Co. cap instead