WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!

Fredrik

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is mi wrk inn progrs pls map!
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re1wind

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The word "swamp" blitzed through my head when i saw the first image, and i do not know why. *shrug* the fog and lighting is a great start, although you may want to increase the strength of some of the exterior lights for readability issues. Not being able to tell what team a person is on due to insufficient lighting is never a good thing :)


Also, the balcony in this image looks accessible to demomen and soldiers, but its hard to tell.
 

Fredrik

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The word "swamp" blitzed through my head when i saw the first image, and i do not know why. *shrug* the fog and lighting is a great start, although you may want to increase the strength of some of the exterior lights for readability issues. Not being able to tell what team a person is on due to insufficient lighting is never a good thing :)


Also, the balcony in this image looks accessible to demomen and soldiers, but its hard to tell.

I didn't even notice that my lights were so weak.
So, I should decrease the light levels on the non-playable areas and increase them over playable areas, right? :)
 
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re1wind

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Basically, yes, and not just around the setup gates, but in most outdoor areas. detail areas shouldn't really be part of the map at this point.
 

LeSwordfish

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The mid tower looks a little strange, as does the sci-fi-y stairs up to the lighthouse, but otherwise that's looking great.

Tone the light in the arch in image 3 down. It attracts a lot of attention.

Consider making the skylight a slightly stronger colour- the maritime stuff can be prone to getting washed out by light like the kinda bland yellow you have now.

The corner bre_stone props need external light origins or they look much darker than they are.

Consider a few different roof textures. Some of the metal ones, particularly the blue-green one and the rust-red, can look quite nice.

But otherwise yes lovely.

EDIT: Oh, and, window top-middle-left of last picture looks like its z-fighting or something.
 

Seba

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Please don't leave this as is, it looks like the wood is just standing on top of the stone :c
 

Dr. Spud

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Did another pass on the leaves. They're still a bit pixely and hard to see the branches underneath, but I think it's better. I'm not sure what else to do to them.

Also have cards to fill out the background now.
 
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Beetle

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Did another pass on the leaves. They're still a bit pixely and hard to see the branches underneath, but I think it's better. I'm not sure what else to do to them.

Also have cards to fill out the background now.

they're beautreeful
 
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What wood you do to try to block off playable space? (I'm assuming these are for a real csgo map, not just a detailing proof) I'm finding it difficult to imagine how you could realistically border a gameplay area with forest nicely, and still keep up a player's realistic expectations of clipping into such trees.
 

Dr. Spud

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CS map barriers of only trees wood be barking mad. I'm making them for someone else's CS:GO map set in a lumberyard, so that map will be foresty but have man-made barriers for much of it. Setting a CS map entirely in a scene like the one pictured above probably would not be appropriate, unless it were a gorge with lots and lots of rocks and vertical cliffs.
 
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Or it could have laser beams running along the perimeter with hidden launch platforms that chuck players into them.

It's a good thing for the CS mapping community that I was never any good at CS