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YM

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It also appears to be projecting backwards which is totally wrong since that's a highly directional light source. It definitely wouldn't cast on the ceiling either.
 

EArkham

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That train... is just... very oddly placed. The rest is quite nice.

"It wasn't a bad job, loading cargo from the warehouse to the railway. That changed when Gate Five was put in. There were objections immediately upon even the suggestion, due to the close proximity and frequent use of the #7 train line, but the foreman would have none of it. All protests were met with his hurriedly muttering something about 'the train god demands blood and blood he shall have.' And ever since, when the #7 rolled in at breakneck speeds, came not the usual satisifaction of a job well done and a cargo car fair loaded to destinations far away, but the stark and closely held terror of having to cross the dreaded tracks at Gate Five."
 

Ravidge

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"It wasn't a bad job, loading cargo from the warehouse to the railway. That changed when Gate Five was put in. There were objections immediately upon even the suggestion, due to the close proximity and frequent use of the #7 train line, but the foreman would have none of it. All protests were met with his hurriedly muttering something about 'the train god demands blood and blood he shall have.' And ever since, when the #7 rolled in at breakneck speeds, came not the usual satisifaction of a job well done and a cargo car fair loaded to destinations far away, but the stark and closely held terror of having to cross the dreaded tracks at Gate Five."

Make a SFM movie, this script is gold.
 

Tarry H Sruman

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I don't know about too wide - Fastlane (which, for the record, is really a bad map to take inspiration from either aesthetically or gameplay-wise) has much wider areas than that.

Those buildings could really stand to be taller. They are short and unmemorable.
 

Freyja

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If you're going to be painting on the canvas, I think it'll be fine. Perhaps the frame could use a darker-brown, more wood-like, but it'll probably be fine with a painting.
 

Fruity Snacks

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Suddenly noticed how purple her underarms are. she needs to try some moisturiser or something

or stop using that dyed womens deodorant. I know it smells lovely like a fresh spring morning in the alps, but that color can't be healthy.