PLR Runway

wait, how does the cart at the full health kit?

I ran through it.

I like the ending, but it was a bit of a surprise since there wasn't any obvious marker saying "you're done here!"

The map overall, just feels like a large box with a bunch of ramps and roofs to jump around on. The cover comes from the height, but you might/probably will see Solly's demos and probably heavies sitting in the upper parts spamming on down below.

I'm not sure how it'll play without a cross-over. Cross-overs are generally pivotal in plr, and maps that don't have them have very strange and generally not-so-good gameplay.

I didn't see too much in the way of health/ammo. besides the full health in the middle, which might be overkill tbh.

Vertically, the map is extremely large, fall off the upper ramps/trusses and you get a big punishment for doing so.


Overall, though, looks nice. Put some good work into it and you might have something interesting.

I ran through the map, and it feel really overscaled, I like the huge height variation, but it lacks a lot of chokepoints.

Some screens:



You must add a choke on the central point it give to the player a goal when he don't want to push the cart. This central point must be an important zone to control if you want to win.



All the map seems overscaled, you must cut your building to the half at least to stay in the 'standards' in term of scale. Plus like that they seems very boring and without life.



Boring.



This map need way more cover, a lot !



This last part seems undefendable, add a recesses for the engineer.



Way too huge, cut your ceiling, and do a better brushwork.

Overall the map has a good potential, but it's fairly too poor in term of gameplay elements.