KotH Junks

This loos pretty good! Just a guess, though: the barrels around the point are going to make it annoying to move around/attack/whatever.

This looks pretty neat already. You've certainly got a good thing going here. I agree with yyler, the hill building is small already, and those barrels just obstruct the floor space even more. I've done some MS Paint-overs to help illustrate my two main bits of feedback.


I am concerned that if one team gets pushed back to spawn, they may not be able to fight their way out easily enough. For the most part, it's an uphill battle, and the enemy might be able to hold the areas circled blue too easily. I could be completely wrong, and only actual testing will tell.


This area on the left may be a bit of a sightline. If it turns out to be in testing, I would recommend putting a door in the frame so that Snipers would have to open the door to see out, and moving the health and ammo either back or outside so that Snipers can't heal straight after taking spam damage.

And finally, here's an overview showing your main routes, which I have no problems with.

I basically agree with everything TheKieranator says.

Yep, he did what I was too lazy to do.

*claps*

Wow it's a very nice brushwork that you have here, just a tip for a further version, try to make your own blends to avoid the harsh cuts between your different floor material.

Those 45 degree angles you set the map edges on are super juicy, we don't get angles like that nearly enough.

Hope you're using instances!

Hi Smogg, I thought it'd be better to keep my comments here so you won't have to refer to separate boards.



I know one of your chief concerns right now is you feel the map is too small, and my suggestion here is shrinking the map, however I feel the corner area surrounding the train cars/silos is just too barren for my likings.

I feel that the central area of the map is too vertically spaced out while being horizontally narrow at the same time. I think I was aiming to bring those proportions closer together with my suggestion. I also felt that the area between the train cars and the point was too big, so I felt moving the train cars in closer would tighten up that area and improve it.

There is a disappointing lack of Chinese boats in this map.

I don't usually give praise to alpha submissions but i'm enjoying the look/feel of the gravelpit-y farmyard theme.

One thing that looks weird though is the truck in the rubble. Either use something else like the large concrete blocks or remove the rubble because it looks odd as is.

Looking forward to see how this progresses.

This is hella cool.

this looks pretty cool indeed, how have i never notice this map before?