CP Artpass Khuntza

Khuntza

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Dec 29, 2009
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That particular room with the rock floor is the only one like it in the map.. all other floors are concrete or wood.. Ill take it on board all the same..

Ive got to go now but ill post some more screenies of some of the other rooms later on..
 

Khuntza

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Dec 29, 2009
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Screen shots of rooms with concrete floors as promised..

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Mr. Happy

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i love that last screen, though i think you should make the interface between the wood struts and the concrete more realistic, maybe add some bases to them made of metal or a different concrete.
 

Khuntza

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Dec 29, 2009
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That shot is of a 'vista' room.. theres not a lot of point detailing this room further than I have already.

Also, OP has been updated with a link to my RC there is still some more custom signage to be added and a couple of little tweaks I want to make.. but its pretty much there..
 

IrishTaxIDriver

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Sep 27, 2008
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That rock is really intense and keeps drawing my eyes to it. Its most noticable when you're pairing it with dull colors like in the last few screenshots.

Also, its very clean for having a rock ceiling! Maybe some dirt on the ground or on the concrete touching the rock?
 

Tinker

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Oct 30, 2008
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The grass outside should definitely be yellow, the green and orange rather clashes.
 

Draco18s

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Sep 19, 2009
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That rock is really intense and keeps drawing my eyes to it. Its most noticable when you're pairing it with dull colors like in the last few screenshots.

Isn't the sunburned country awesome?
</reference to a book* no one's heard of>
*It's by Bill Bryson called In a Sunburned Country about his trek across Australia.
 

FeartheMango

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Sep 8, 2009
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Isn't the sunburned country awesome?
</reference to a book* no one's heard of>
*It's by Bill Bryson called In a Sunburned Country about his trek across Australia.



great book, far better than some of his earlier novels.

And I say keep the rock the way it is, just add more things to detract away from it, ie. Metal struts, wires lights ventilations shafts etc.
 

Draco18s

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great book, far better than some of his earlier novels.

I only heard snatches because my dad listened to them in the car (books on tape). So I only have a meager view of any of them.
But in general, I didn't much care for the guy's writing.
(At least they're better than Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance)
 

FeartheMango

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I only heard snatches because my dad listened to them in the car (books on tape). So I only have a meager view of any of them.
But in general, I didn't much care for the guy's writing.
(At least they're better than Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance)

It's true, his style of writing leaves much to be desired, But I think the main point is his comical view of most things.

( He does this far better in another book, called I'm a Stranger here myself, In which he recalls his livings in America.)