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moroes

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You have a cool ambient with a good utilization of props to add nice details.

My remark is that I think it's too dark in some places and the colors of your texture or the grey atmosphere (I don't really know) make us believe to a "flat" level...and it's not the case!
Improve these things to have a better vision on the architecture and I'm sure you'll have a better map dude :)
 
3Dnj

3Dnj

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Thanks, bro, actually I'm testing a différent theme where people could not say anymore that the map is too dark :D

I change nature textures too for custom made with official one. Screens asap. :)
 
3Dnj

3Dnj

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Big update ! (with a ungly fast compil)

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Urser

Urser

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Oh my goodness. The lavender sky and soft lighting really just pushes your map up and above. Everything looks astounding!

Just don't forget about those dev textures in the last pic. ;)
 
Pc_Madness

Pc_Madness

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Urser said:
Just don't forget about those dev textures in the last pic. ;)
Click to expand...

Theres also a visible no draw brush directly above it in that screenshot near the prop rocks. Make sure you add a dirt road that goes in C in that same pic, atm its all grass. :)

Looking great though, I love what you've done with the alpine theme. :)
 
Beamos

Beamos

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Your map is very lovely, but the thought of running the map... *shivers* I REALLY hope you'll put the rest of the time remaining into optimizing @_@;
 
Scotland Tom

Scotland Tom

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This map looks friggin' beautiful! I know I've looked at previous screens and commented before, but it's seen so much change (especially with the lighting) that I practically didn't recognize it! This easily just shot up my list of potential contenders.

One minor thing. These cliffs:
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The displacement work all looks really great, but there's a pretty hard, straightish border between the displacements and the models on the top. Is there a way you could blend between the two a little better?

Beyond that, truly fine work. So long as it's all optimized to run well then I would love to play this map.
 
Scotland Tom

Scotland Tom

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3Dnj said:
Thanks guys, but I probably can't finish it in time...
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What?! But it looks practically done as it is! Unless there's dozens of hours of work beyond what we can see in the screenshots I don't think there's any excuse not to polish this one up and submit it.

Based on the incredible screens you're a sure contender to win this one. Don't give up!
 
3Dnj

3Dnj

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I don't give up, there is B an C to finish, and optimisation, clipping, 3D skybox, soundscape... That's gonna be hard :)
 
IrishTaxIDriver

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That rock texture doesn't look like it fits in TF2 to me, its a little too detailed and sharp. It really brings attention to the border between the displacement and the cliff model.

Even if you gotta do basic texture swaps, submit it!
 
Tinker

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The red brick texture on the screenshot with the entrance of the red base is a hl2 texture.
 
tyler

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I think it's a TF2 texture too, but I don't think it fits there. Isn't that the swamp brick? Is there a swamp brick? Anyway, it looks off.
 
3Dnj

3Dnj

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Ok so I definitively don't have the time to finish it for Saturday. too many work left :(
 
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