WiP in WiP, post your screenshots!
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cyked
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Dragonstorm24
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Thanks. Detailing is my real weak point, so thats what i need the feedback on right now.
Now either i could do the not-fun difficult detailing part again, or i could go "sod it" and do dev stuff. I pick option B.
Nah, you don't need to re-detail from scratch or anything. Just start by removing the unnecessary stuff.
First screenshot, for example: Remove everything on the table, the table, the benches, the set of lockers behind the pushcart. Much more manageable amount of props.
(Oh, and maybe add a floor, even if it's just some basic wood -- having resupply props on dirt there looks a bit strange but that might be due to the cropping of the screenshot)
Okay, second screenshot may require some re-detailing. It's strange to have the tracks cross over a traincar.
Third screenshot, remove the large white vertical pipe, the pipes in the small building, the carts on the side track, the concrete barricade in the bottom right corner and top left corner, and adjust those rocks to serve the same purpose.
Kep
First screenshot, for example: Remove everything on the table, the table, the benches, the set of lockers behind the pushcart. Much more manageable amount of props.
(Oh, and maybe add a floor, even if it's just some basic wood -- having resupply props on dirt there looks a bit strange but that might be due to the cropping of the screenshot)
Okay, second screenshot may require some re-detailing. It's strange to have the tracks cross over a traincar.
Third screenshot, remove the large white vertical pipe, the pipes in the small building, the carts on the side track, the concrete barricade in the bottom right corner and top left corner, and adjust those rocks to serve the same purpose.
Kep
Ginger
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Hey!
Feel free to take hold of the concept/layout. I can even send you my VMTs if you want
Goombac
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Hey!
Feel free to take hold of the concept/layout. I can even send you my VMTs if you want
I assume you mean .vmf's?
Fredrik
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gooba needs to paint these screens and it's done.
I based the colors heavily on the computer consoles, so no visible paint strokes and stuff
very simple
Those looks great!
you're going to make a blue one too, right?
Godslayer57
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I decided , due to a like of the look of Japanese shrines. i decided to make a map based around a shrine!
Those roofs aren't easy
Those roofs aren't easy
I decided , due to a like of the look of Japanese shrines. i decided to make a map based around a shrine!
Those roofs aren't easy
Ah hah, so that's what the larger lanterns were for. Nice work!
Kep