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• Nov 16, 2009

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i started making this map before i joined these forums so it hasnt been playtested yet. its probably too late to do major changes, so im hoping they wont be necessary.

anyway i think it turned out visually attractive.

gimme tips on what mistakes i made and how to evade them in the future.

 

Locutus

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• Nov 16, 2009

• #2

The cap seems like it's in too tight of a space.

 

Xy²

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• Nov 16, 2009

• #3

I played you map 2 minutes ago and it looks great. You mapped that well. But i miss props!
You have no props for lights or something like that. It looks a bit boring without that. Add some props

 

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Engineer

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• Nov 16, 2009

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Yeah, the detail looks great, but as Xy² said: You need more props. Just to spice it up

 

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martijntje

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• Nov 16, 2009

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so, just from the screenshot, looking very nice. Even without props, it looks quite well.

EDIT: also on the fourth screenshot, the hill seems too steep

 

Last edited: Nov 16, 2009

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• Nov 16, 2009

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indeed, but i decided to go easy with props until im sure bigger changes are unnecessary. il definitely add props in next versions

 

Exist

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• Nov 16, 2009

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for the cap, you might consider opening up the roof for demomans and what not. This would defiantly make the point more versatile.

 

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absurdistof

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• Nov 17, 2009

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I'd also vary your lighting and add overlays.

 

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lana

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• Nov 17, 2009

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That point is very protected.