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Micnax

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While you're at it, tell me what to do with this red thing.

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Make it a foundation for a crane.
 

tyler

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Definitely a good idea, but it is a bit large.

Also to note, the transition of detailing right there is kind of abrupt. (I know it isn't done, just pointing it out.)

You mean the stuff Rav pointed out last page, or on the tower itself?

Also the tower is meant to be modeled sort of after these guys for rough scale/shape:

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/2/23/Berlin_Wall_Watch-Tower_Typ_BT-11_2_apel.JPG
http://www.ifimages.com/photos/e73i...r-582/Coastguard-Watch-Tower-Calshot-Spit.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_LthqfPygWOQ/SwDDjpp1itI/AAAAAAAADF4/9zRUlNgN3hw/s1600/watchtower.jpg

I know that being based on reality doesn't always mean it's fine, but do you guys really think it's significantly large enough that if you hadn't been asked to comment on it you would notice?
 

tyler

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Ehh.... making the base a cylinder makes it look worse, imo. It cuts out so much volume that it becomes unbelievable even to me.

I trashed the dish, maybe that's enough, we'll see if anyone says anything next year when I release the next version
 

Seba

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IMO the top 'house' should be rectangular because the base is, too.
 

Fruity Snacks

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Look at all you're images, they all have round houses, with round pillars.

Structure wise, it's smarter to do it that way, so you have an even distribution of weight on the support pillar. It's even more wise to make it cylindrical.

Aesthetically, if you're looking at it, you except some unity, you start from the bottom, you have the "abrupt" 90 degree angles, which then go to the round, lacking-abrupt-angles, so the transition is kind of jarring.

Thats basically the best way I can put it, I guess.
 

Trotim

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I just think the control room is too large, the entire fat middle part is. Should just be as thick as the top and bottom of the round thing imo
 

tyler

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Yeah I think the more I look at it, the more I think it's just too fat. Had to see it in game to be certain.

l1JsK.jpg


Gonna shrink it down and we'll see.
 

grazr

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Better, though i think you can afford to make it taller. That's probably why the thing looked so fat as well, because it was short, it looked more wide.